Improving a Recount

L.I:To rivise and edit a recount.
This week for writing we learned about to rivise and edit a recount.We had
to edit a simple recount.We had to get in partners.They had to write a simple sentence.
When they are finish there partner had to improve there writing.There is a point system.
Of we improve it that means you will get points and you will win.Of you win you just win but of
you lose that means two more of long simple sentences.

The point System is

1 point for every change/addition made

1 point if an adjective is added

1 point is an adverb is added

2 points if the title was reworked to be more interesting

2 points if the word said is changed to be more interesting

2 points if punctuation is added (Exclamation, Question mark, Ellipsis, speech marks)

5 points if the sentence has been developed using our strategy from 3 weeks ago

5 points if the changes makes TREE more visible

-2 points if a capital letter is used outside of beginning of a sentence and a persons name

-10 points if there is only Full stops and/or commas

-20 points if only adjectives have been added

-20 points if there is under 10 changes and/or the changes didn’t make sense

That is the point system.A structure of a recount is TREE.TREE stands for

• Title
• Reveal
• Events
• Ending